need a headline and rewrite copy: Two out of every 3 women in the U.S. are subscribers/members - now you can also target their husbands and young adult sons. These households constitute one of the largest populations of American consumer spending power concentrated in any single source. While subscribers to these magazines are predominantly women, their husbands are at their sides making joint purchasing decisions, taking an active role in parenting, and managing personal finances. They're also out in the yard helping their wives garden, tackling do-it-yourself projects, planning the next family vacation, and rooting on their favorite sports teams. Additional Info (Added 2/1/2010 11:57)... Market to our millions of members with almost free advertising *$365 one time annual set up fee (a dollar a day) *Only pay us a commission that you set. What percent would you pay per $1,000 we bring your business? *we guarantee the $1,000 *You have nothing to lose Send your contact information & percent rate, to email xyz Two out of every 3 women in the U.S. are subscribers/members - now you can also target their husbands and young adult sons. These households constitute one of the largest populations of American consumer spending power concentrated in any single source. While subscribers to these magazines are predominantly women, their husbands are at their sides making joint purchasing decisions, taking an active role in parenting, and managing personal finances. They�re also out in the yard helping their wives garden, tackling do-it-yourself projects, planning the next family vacation, and rooting on their favorite sports teams. When you look at the job I would like you to do � you see two parts � one is sales copy � two is about who we are, perhaps when you read all this at may be confessing, your job is to make this believable with new copy and graphics. Let me explain a bit to give you more insight. We will be putting together a page of service stations (like a directory i.e. yellow pages) that list is the stations that our members can use to get discounts on services for auto. What you are building is the invite to get on that list. When complete the members will get the list to see where to go for services. That list goes on & on. When the members go to get services they get discounts. The next list you build will be another service our members can use. And so on. When the members use the services and get discounts. Each member has paid us a fee to be a member and new members will pay us a small membership fee to get discounts and use our discount card (like the card you use at the membership type warehouse: Costco, BJs, etc. but this is for local small businesses - like auto repair. any ques now? Keywords: Marketing, proofreading, Copywriting, slide, Advertising, powerpoint, Speech, writing, writer